3/27/2012

[Mr.Menard] Third Assignment 032212

[Revision]

Like many of Mark Twain’s stories, “Eve’s Diary” and “Adam’s Diary” fall into the category of realism. Twain’ realism not only describes real incidents, but also contains broader themes. In “Eve’s Diary” and “Adam’s Diary”, Twain deals with issues including stereotypes of each sex at that time and the controversy going on. He depicts the difference between male and female genders within the flow of his story. The story also touches the boundary of issues like women suffrage at the same time.

To start with, Twain differentiates the stereotypes of men and women with convincing details. Twain even digs into the part of how men and women think and look at each other differently. Adam, the male in the story, is an indifferent character. He neither cares about Eve, nor feels love toward her at first. True to nature, Adam “looks a gift horse in the mouth” when God first gives him Eve. He can only complain rather than enjoy the company. He still wants to do everything on his own rather than to share the Garden with a mate.

On the other hand, Eve expects Adam to see and think in the same way as she does, thus never asks his opinion while naming all the objects. She just suddenly appears in his life and yearns for him to approve and understand. She feels anxious for his love all the time, though she also considers him far less intelligent compared to her. On one side, it shows woman's unusual decisiveness at that time. It also shows how a typical woman figure at that time longed for their husband’s love and care, as a stereotype.

Twain not only tries to describe the typical ideals of men and women but also seems to slightly argue that women worth for their suffrage. In “Eve’s Diary”, Eve names every single object and decides what she wants by herself, where Adam is quite indifferent on every matter. This shows the intelligence and decisiveness of women. Unlike the gender stereotype of the time back then, woman is described as someone who worth for deciding matters. Twain’s support for women suffrage is hidden in almost every detail in the plot; Eve takes lead in all the incidents that happens.

Overall, I was impressed on how descriptive and pointy he was in showing the difference between men and women. As a girl, I have always felt in the same way as Eve does in the story. Though it is embarrassing to confess, I have considered females as to be more considerate and decisive than male. But frankly on the other hand, I have wanted to be cared and loved by boys around me at the same time. The fact which I have considered as an irony was exactly described in Twain’s short stories. Twain had a good combination in describing the female character in a way he saw them and in a way that most of others considered them. It was very new to read a piece of writing that I could both enjoy and sympathize at the same time.



[Original Article]

As Mark Twain was a Realistic writer of the time, many of his stories fall into the category of realism. In “Eve’s Diary” and “Adam’s Diary”, Twain put both issues of general thought at that time and the core problem going on. Describing the difference between male and female would be the one dealing with more “general” idea; but Twain also had the issue of women suffrage controversy in the stories.
To start with, Twain depicted the stereotypes of men and women at his time very much in detail. He even dug into the part of how men and women think and look at each other. Adam, the male in the story, is a very indifferent character. He doesn’t care about Eve, considering her annoying. True to nature, Adam “looks a gift horse in the mouth” when God first gave him Eve. He could only complain rather than enjoy the company. He still wanted to do everything on his own rather than share the Garden with a mate.
On the other hand, Eve expected Adam to see and think in the same way as she did and think in the same way as she did, thus never asked his opinion on names, places, anything. She just appeared in his like and expected him to approve and understand. She felt anxious for his love, where she also considered him far less unintelligent than her at the same time. As a girl myself, I agree with Eve more than with Adam. Sometimes, I also long for love and feel anxious because of that.
Twain not only tried to describe the typical ideals of men and women but also wanted to point out that women had right for their suffrage. In “Eve’s Diary”, Eve named every single objects and decided what she wanted by herself, where Adam was quite indifferent on every matter. This shows Twain’s support for women suffrage at the time. Overall, I was impressed on how descriptive and pointy he was in showing the difference between men and women.

[Comments]

Hae Uk Koh: I think you were very precise yet coherent in describing Adam and Eve’s stereotypes. But, the issue regarding women’s suffrage could have been dealt in more detail. It seems you only point at one event (or feature) in the story and don’t give much of an analysis on it. Also, I think labeling the women advocacy issue in the stories as only women’s suffrage issue narrows the discussion too much. Still you dealt the themes presented in the Intro and was fairly good in explaining them. Good work!


3/14/2012

Brief comment after watching two videos on Kony 2012 an hour ago.

Well, I admit that the video Kony 2012 seems to be somewhat exaggerated, but I don't regret crying for that about an hour ago. How can we ignore a boy saying "I would rather die than living tomorrow"? According to the video, there have been 30,000 children abducted for LRA, and this is a fact that we can't deny. The Ugandan girl in her video is, what she is basically saying is that she's living fine, and Kony doesn't seem to be a serious problem because her grandparents never talked about him. I'm not being biased, but we all see that she speaks perfect English, gets on social networks often, and must be highly educated, at least compared to those 30,000 children in LRA. She seems to have come from a comparably wealthy family in Uganda. And even if my assumptions are all false, she is saying she has never experienced such things in the Kony 2012 video, thus, they are overacting toward the situation. 
I live in Korea. And there are a lot of people suffering from the "irregular jobs"; they often get injured by the company owners, and even get killed while protesting. This IS a very serious problem that  all Koreans should be aware of, and fight with, because this is not right. Well, I'm not experiencing that. My parents are both professors and my family is relatively wealthy. And my grandparents don't care about those workers. But does that mean the problem is not as serious? Does that sound like a right logic and persuading reasoning? I don't think so. She seems more likely to be embarrassed, rather than worried of the fact that her country is being portrayed as a "hellhole", while she's living quite well. I don't think this has anything to do with "educating" myself of how wonderful Uganda is to visit. 
Whether the video is exaggerated or not, whether there's 100000000 children suffering or only 30000 suffering, something wrong should not be happening in the world. Kony is definitely doing something wrong. Justice should lie on everyone in every matter, regardless of how many people are involved in it.



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3/11/2012

[Mr.Menard] Second Assignment (03.12.2012) ! :)


[Things to Consider for the Revision]
-      Elaborate my confession more and try to deliver how I felt towards a person who tried to be in the upper level of mentality than I am in.
-      Explain a motivation of the main character in <The Tell-Tale Heart> killing an old man who hadn’t done anything wrong.

[Revision]

For both of Edgar Allen Poe’s short stories that we have gone through in class, I could understand the characters, and even agree with them in further. When looking at the novels on their surface, the narrators of the stories committed murder out of no reason. But when digging into a more fundamental layer of the novels, there is something deeper than that. I believe it is all about the natural hatreds of human beings: hatreds toward others who seem to be better than them. When human beings find those who are better than them in any sense, they start to grow angers, get anxious, and eventually hate them. The two stories, "The Cask of Amontillado" and "The Tell-Tale Heart", not only deal with the original hatreds, but they also show the importance of rules in the world at the same time.

To start with, main characters in both "The Cask of Amontillado" and "The Tell-Tale Heart" had a similar driving force that eventually led them to commit murder. In “The Cask of Amontillado”, Montreson got a revenge on Fortunato because Montreson was biased in dealing with Fortunato. Montreson took every single action of Fortunato as a negative aspect towards him because he felt inferior and thus jealous. Although that is not exactly what happens in “The Tell-Tale Heart”, they basically bear the same theme of jealousy. The main character in “The Tell-Tale-Heart” hated the old man’s eyes because he was jealous of the brightness of them. He was envious of the old man's eagle-like eyes and could not endure looking at them anymore, thus murdered him.

To be honest, I’ve been having the same kind of conception as the main characters for a long time. Though I’m not sure whether I really do get overly jealous, or I just think I do so, there’s one thing I can guarantee- I might have been just like Montreson in “The Cask of Amontillado”, if there was no rule existing in the world. There’s no law, no justice in the world of “The Cask of Amontillao”, and that’s how Montreson’s whole plan could work out so well. Whether it’s a biased revenge or not, at least I believe, the fundamental motive came out of Montreson’s unconsciousness because there was nothing to control him. It cannot be stated that there are less murder cases committed nowadays because we have laws, but it is true that the rate should have been worse if there were no rules existing.

Though it’s quite embarrassing to confess, I feel bad whenever I find another person who is similar to me or seems to be in the upper level of mentality compared to myself. Even if that person had not committed any wrongness on me, I feel as if he or she overly competes with me. Perhaps, that is because I feel competitive towards them, full of jealousy and anxiety. For Instance, when I first met my roommate Flora, I found her very similar to me, thus feeling insecure. I tried not to share any deep conversation with her because I thought she was being competitive and was trying to dig out my secrets. However, now I know, that was all my imagination.

Being jealous of someone else is definitely not a crime. But if that feeling grows so high that it reaches the level where you want to harm others, it is a crime. While admitting that jealousy is a natural consequence of life, we all would have to try not to jump over the proper line of doing so. We cannot always follow our instinct when it harms other people. Poe's two short stories, "The Cask of Amontillado" and "The Tell-Tale Heart" both gave me a great chance to not only realize the deep cause of human hatred, but to also look back on myself and to try to be a more considerate person in dealing with people and in forming deeper relationship with them.

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