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[The house should ban school uniforms.]
Whenever you walk by the streets near middle
schools or high schools in Korea or Japan, you can easily find girls in a very
short school uniform skirts or boys in a pair of tightened jeans. Students try
to accentuate their specialty or to simply show some rebel to this whole
education system of conformity by deforming their school uniforms. One of the
most common reasons of why students in Korea get “penalty points” at school is
because they have violated the “dress code” of wearing school uniforms. Then
what is the point of wearing the same school uniforms every day? The natural
consequence of students not wanting to be the same as others around them is
worsening the relationship between students and teachers.
What is the fundamental reason for wearing the
same uniforms in the first place? In Korea, wearing uniforms is just one natural
rule of attending schools. Schools have never told us why. Whenever we wonder
why, all they tell us is because it has been that way for a long time. Then how
long is that long time? Korean schools have been requiring school uniforms
since the Japanese colonial era, so the origin is from the Japanese schools.
How about the other countries? Well, I don’t know yet. But I’m pretty sure all
they could ever give as a reason for wearing school uniforms is that it helps
unity of students attending the same school.
For my school, we have one special reason for
wearing school uniform: to keep the tradition of “Korean minjok”. To keep the
Korean destiny, we are forced to wear Hanbok every single day. Wearing Hanbok
uniform is good for it being special compared to other high schools. But that
statement becomes true because there is a precondition that all Korean high
schools require school uniforms. If there weren’t, why would it be that happy?
I also have a lot of things to say about keeping tradition by wearing
traditional clothes all the time, but I won’t for now since it’s a little bit
off-topic.
School uniforms also become a big financial
burden for a lot of parents in the middle or lower class. My middle school
uniforms cost about $700 in average, in order to buy both ones for summer and
winter. Seven hundred dollars is such a big deal for normal people, considering
they would have to buy more each time their children grow. There are some
schools that have even more expensive uniforms such as my high school. My
parents spent more than $2000 in the beginning of the semester, just for the
purchase of school uniforms. If the schools cannot give us apparent reasons for
wearing uniforms, the cost of them can never be justified at all.
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